Post by Amber on Jun 20, 2005 18:40:43 GMT -5
Running Wild and Free, Trying To Find That Place
Wind in my mane,
ground under my hooves,
don't know where you're going,
and don't know what to do,
all I know is,
I'm bound to run with you,
free from all others,
free from the pain,
free from each other,
even free from the rain,
eating when we feel,
drinking when we please,
wind rustling the trees,
all sins are gone,
to the free place we are drawn,
the journey is not ending,
it's only just begun,
but while we are going,
let's try to have some fun.
With you I'm bound to run!
This is one that I wrote for my signature for Freedom Found. It's about horses, as you can see, but I like it.
And, Gia, this one is not morbid!
Wind in my mane,
ground under my hooves,
don't know where you're going,
and don't know what to do,
all I know is,
I'm bound to run with you,
free from all others,
free from the pain,
free from each other,
even free from the rain,
eating when we feel,
drinking when we please,
wind rustling the trees,
all sins are gone,
to the free place we are drawn,
the journey is not ending,
it's only just begun,
but while we are going,
let's try to have some fun.
With you I'm bound to run!
This is one that I wrote for my signature for Freedom Found. It's about horses, as you can see, but I like it.
And, Gia, this one is not morbid!
I will give this poem ermm... 7 and a half/10. It is good because the rhyming and the reapeating of words to make them stay in your mind. I also like the theme. The only improvement that I can see really is that it could have been longer. That's all though, although some poems are very good short.
