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Post by Fren on Jun 20, 2005 16:58:32 GMT -5
Well...here's another of my rare and morbid poems...I'd really not like to say where I got the inspiration...it really depresses me...maybe some other time...but for now, here it is.  .::I Watch you suffer::.
I see you weep
See the tears fall
But I turn away
No help at all.
Hope's lost for you
I look elsewhere
I killed your dreams
Without a care.
Now you cry out
For one last time
But I don't care
I watch, and smile.
Inside, I'm cold
Outside, the same
I watch and smirk
As you call my name.
I watch you suffer
Laugh as I see
The pain that you feel
All caused by me.
Why should I care
If you break down?
Why should I care
If you're no longer around?
You don't mean sh*t
To me you know
I see your pain
And I'm glad it's so. Sorry...another morbid one...  |
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Post by Amber on Jun 20, 2005 18:37:12 GMT -5
Fren that's not really a morbid one, that's a mean one.... I like it though. Nice ryming and word choice.
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Post by Fren on Jun 21, 2005 10:41:47 GMT -5
Thanks. ^^
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Post by Amber on Jun 21, 2005 14:26:53 GMT -5
Welcome..... better than I could do.
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Post by Fren on Jun 21, 2005 14:52:12 GMT -5
No it ain't! All your things are amazing!
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Post by Sapphire unseen by mother on Jun 21, 2005 15:17:15 GMT -5
I can guess what your inspiration was...
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Fren unseen by Danielle lol
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Post by Fren unseen by Danielle lol on Jun 21, 2005 16:16:33 GMT -5
You can?  Well...guess, and I'll tell you if you're right...in fact, PM me it... |
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Post by Fren not logged in too lazy on Jun 21, 2005 16:17:13 GMT -5
Ooops, I meant the confused smiley.
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Post by Amber on Jun 21, 2005 17:04:18 GMT -5
Did you just do it, or was there an inspiration?
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Post by Rain on Jun 21, 2005 17:56:27 GMT -5
It is a very good Morbid one Fren!!  |
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Post by Giacamo on Jun 21, 2005 20:38:54 GMT -5
you guys views of morbid arent seeing eye to eye with mine, to me fren would be doing something MORBID if he posted pics of himself in a speedo on the site, but i would also call that disturbing and gay....but hey thats just me..
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Post by Rain on Jun 24, 2005 4:59:54 GMT -5
Argh Gia!! Don't do that! *disturbing mental images*
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Post by Fren on Jun 24, 2005 10:22:22 GMT -5
Right, first of all...I don't have a speedo. Second, no ofence to me, but, eww. Third, unless Danielle is hiding something, I don't think I'm gay...
LOL
Danielle just saw that and went off in a huff. ^^
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Post by Giacamo on Jun 24, 2005 11:32:14 GMT -5
hey i said IF you took pics of yourself in a speedo and put them on the site, but pics that you give to your girlfriend are none of my business....thank god...
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Observe every aspect of the world, and in doing so, you will discover every aspect of yourself
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Post by Leli on Jun 25, 2005 15:20:56 GMT -5
Wow, Fren... just wow. Very morbid though *hugs Fren just in case he needs a hug* But I like it. Nice words.
Gia, you're mad, and quite cynical... we should talk lol.
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Post by Sapphire Eyes on Jun 25, 2005 15:56:17 GMT -5
Hehe.. My guess was true, wasn't it?
Poor you...
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Post by Amber on Jun 26, 2005 18:38:11 GMT -5
Aw.... Fren.... let me guess..... my guess is so sad.....  |
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Post by Giacamo on Jun 26, 2005 20:03:38 GMT -5
i am NOT mad or cynical!! if i was mad or cynical i would WANT to see fren in a speedo...
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Post by Amber on Jun 27, 2005 19:33:27 GMT -5
No Gia, just disturbing mental images right?
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Post by Giacamo on Jun 27, 2005 21:09:28 GMT -5
sure if you want them to  be if not just dont theink about it ;D |
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Post by Amber on Jun 29, 2005 17:02:16 GMT -5
Okay, I didn't understand anything of what you just said.
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Post by Koda on Jun 29, 2005 18:27:18 GMT -5
Awesome Fren!
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Post by Giacamo on Jun 29, 2005 22:23:56 GMT -5
if you dont want it to be disturbing amber just dont think of it ;D
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Post by Amber on Jun 30, 2005 19:07:27 GMT -5
How can I not think of it when you post it!
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Post by Giacamo on Jun 30, 2005 21:51:50 GMT -5
i dunno.....that all lies in your brain...dont ask me....
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Post by Crisana on Jul 1, 2005 8:44:04 GMT -5
ooookkkkaaaaayyyyy....*Disturbing images deleted from my, amber and gias mind*..and yes YOU gia...no more dirty images..*throws away dirty images deleter bottle*...hah...Okay i have a wierd imagination and im going crazy...*laughs uncontroallably*
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Post by Amber on Jul 5, 2005 20:05:59 GMT -5
Sapphire, Fren says your guess is wrong!
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