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Post by Amber on Jun 14, 2005 18:39:23 GMT -5
This is when someone is lying in a hospital bed. He/she is very sick because the one that he/she loves is dead. Now that death's parted us, I hope you know, even though I didn't make a fuss, I have emotions churning inside, your string was cut, and I'm here crying, silently weeping, black I don now, I must ask how, in my head, not showing on my face, the will to live is gone, I'm losing my life's race, hoping to die, spark of life's disappeared, I am now so weak, I would have cheered, but my strength is gone, I have a tear-stained face, I'm slowly leaving this world, I'm leaving this place, the happy thought I have, is I will be with you. "She died," The last part was a doctor or nurse who was near him/her when he/she died. I got inspired by my uncle dieing.
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Post by Giacamo on Jun 14, 2005 19:41:25 GMT -5
that is so sad....i know first hand wat its like to lay on your death bed.....
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Post by Javian on Jun 14, 2005 20:44:21 GMT -5
Yeah it is, but emotional in a very beautiful way. Two thumbs up, er in a good, positive way!
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Post by Rain on Jun 15, 2005 1:55:30 GMT -5
Well done Amber, very depressing.
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Post by Giacamo on Jun 15, 2005 9:48:38 GMT -5
lol that sound kinda silly you sayin it all happily soundin, thats like saying yay ive been punched in the face, AND you busted my lip, good goin'!!
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Post by Amber on Jun 15, 2005 13:13:47 GMT -5
lol thank you for telling me it's very depressing. Keepin' my spirits up!
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Post by Fren on Jun 15, 2005 15:19:27 GMT -5
Lol, but it's true...somethin' like, 'well done, you made me cry!!!' =) Erm...except, you didn't
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Post by Rain on Jun 15, 2005 16:15:54 GMT -5
Lol, yeah, I like things that can make me cry.
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Post by Amber on Jun 15, 2005 18:21:10 GMT -5
Uh, Fren, would you have cried if you weren't well....... if you weren't how you were, Fren?
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Post by Sapphire Eyes on Jun 18, 2005 5:04:04 GMT -5
lol That's a funny question.
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Post by Amber on Jun 18, 2005 12:23:10 GMT -5
Fren never cries for anything, so if he wasn't Fren, would he have cried.
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