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Despair
Jun 5, 2005 14:16:37 GMT -5
Post by Fren on Jun 5, 2005 14:16:37 GMT -5
Despair
In broken hearts and broken dreams, And lives torn apart at the seams, Buried deep, yet fresh and clear, The cause of death, and countless tears, It stings and it burns, Your emotions it churns, It breaks and it bruises your heart. You know that it's there, When you're choking on air, And you find yourself back at the start. You can't help but break down, And you fall to the ground, It tears you apart from inside. Despair, it is there, you're tearing out your hair, You c'n run but you can never hide.
I got inspiration for that on September 11th. When I saw the pictures of people on the news, who'd lost loved ones, or worse, didn't even know if they had or not, in the deepest state of dispair...this happened. Sorry it's very morbid...but the inspiration was, too.
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Darkness
Omega
Memories and dreams. Can't get rid of them. They haunt me.
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Despair
Jun 5, 2005 14:20:33 GMT -5
Post by Darkness on Jun 5, 2005 14:20:33 GMT -5
Awww.. That's a very good one......
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Post by Rain on Jun 6, 2005 2:55:02 GMT -5
Wow that poems really good despite where you got the inspiration. Well written!
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Despair
Jun 6, 2005 10:15:03 GMT -5
Post by Giacamo on Jun 6, 2005 10:15:03 GMT -5
not that that poem wasnt good buy why cant anyone write a happy poem about....where babys burp and flowers bloom?
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Despair
Jun 6, 2005 10:50:23 GMT -5
Post by Fren on Jun 6, 2005 10:50:23 GMT -5
LOL. I know, we are a morbid lot, aren't we? I don't really do many poems, but...any rare ones that occur are...morbidly morbid? lol. And thankies, you guys. ^^
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Despair
Jun 6, 2005 10:52:28 GMT -5
Post by Fren on Jun 6, 2005 10:52:28 GMT -5
Giacomo is sad, so sad, It makes him pretty mad, oh mad, When all we morbid wolvies here, Write of death etc, and lotsa tears, I'm writing this to take the piss, My morbid self, though, I will miss. LOL
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Noche
Omega
Darkness is an eternal power!!
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Despair
Jun 6, 2005 11:05:19 GMT -5
Post by Noche on Jun 6, 2005 11:05:19 GMT -5
I don't know about you guys but i find it easier to write about darkness and sad stuff. I mean it's all around us, so much is going on - destruction, death. We have so much inspiration...but unless their's something really touching, whether it be a birth, marriage or any other mushy stuff - it's really really hard to write a happy poem.
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Despair
Jun 6, 2005 11:33:17 GMT -5
Post by Fren on Jun 6, 2005 11:33:17 GMT -5
Yup I agree totally. Same applies to me, when I do write.
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Darkness
Omega
Memories and dreams. Can't get rid of them. They haunt me.
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Post by Darkness on Jun 9, 2005 8:01:38 GMT -5
Muahawahaha! I luff your poem about Giacamo1 *Laughs madly* No offence Giacamo.. lol ;D
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Despair
Jun 9, 2005 16:08:31 GMT -5
Post by Giacamo on Jun 9, 2005 16:08:31 GMT -5
That....wasnt...very nice....I....I HATE U!!! *cries uncontrollably* YOUR ALL GONA GIT YOURS!!! *points a paw at fren and darkness, then runs away*
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Despair
Jun 9, 2005 16:35:00 GMT -5
Post by Sapphire Eyes on Jun 9, 2005 16:35:00 GMT -5
*Points too 'cos it's fun but doesn't run away. Just keeps laughing at all of them*
LOLOLOLOL
;D
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Despair
Jun 14, 2005 13:45:24 GMT -5
Post by Amber on Jun 14, 2005 13:45:24 GMT -5
*thinks Sapphire is crazy and points too, though at Sapphire*
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Post by Crisana on Jul 1, 2005 8:40:52 GMT -5
*Points t amber just to join in doesn't even know why...*
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Despair
Jul 5, 2005 20:04:55 GMT -5
Post by Amber on Jul 5, 2005 20:04:55 GMT -5
lol ;D
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