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Post by Amber on May 30, 2005 11:58:51 GMT -5
The Most Powerful
Jaws and claws, teeth and paws, biting, slashing, tearing, blood is flowing wolves are scaring, one by one, they're eliminated, their lives and blood, they've traded, if they win, they get higher, if they lose, and they're tired, they die, and leave others, to get the powerful place, if you win, you get anothers, but to face me? tell me your joking, I can imagine you choking, my jaws and claws, my teeth and paws, I wonder what your blood tastes like? my jaws and claws, my teeth and paws, I'll stand there laughing, blood covering, my jaws and claws, my teeth and paws.
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Post by Rain on May 30, 2005 12:04:35 GMT -5
I like it, the rhyming is very good.
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Post by Amber on May 30, 2005 12:31:49 GMT -5
I can't do poems that don't ryme, they sound weird when I read them to myself.
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Post by Rain on May 30, 2005 12:55:07 GMT -5
Really? It is so much easier to do poems that don't rhyme.
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Post by Amber on May 30, 2005 16:38:09 GMT -5
I tried one once, it sounded awful!
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Post by Rain on May 30, 2005 17:02:28 GMT -5
Awww... bless ya.
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Post by Amber on May 30, 2005 17:20:24 GMT -5
Is taht your favorite saying?
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Post by Rain on May 30, 2005 17:25:35 GMT -5
Yeah, lol.
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Post by Amber on May 30, 2005 17:39:48 GMT -5
Oh........... *can think of nothing else to say*
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Post by Sapphire Eyes on May 31, 2005 7:21:00 GMT -5
I like this poem, too1 Wow.. I can't do anything like that... lol
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Post by Amber on May 31, 2005 14:07:26 GMT -5
Thank you so much Sapphire!
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Post by Giacamo on Jun 3, 2005 20:03:26 GMT -5
this poem is going to give me nightmares.....
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Post by Amber on Jun 14, 2005 13:38:30 GMT -5
Oh, I'm sorry. don't read Rain's then, the one called suicide.
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Post by Crisana on Jun 14, 2005 13:42:03 GMT -5
lol..thats such a good poem...lol...carm it gia ya fine...lol...wont give ya nightmares i promise..
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Post by Amber on Jun 14, 2005 17:18:19 GMT -5
Hopefully. lol I got really freaked out when Rain said she wanted to hang herself, but I got over it.
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