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Post by Amber on May 26, 2005 17:42:05 GMT -5
I don't know if you liked the other one, but I felt like writing this one anyway. Death is Red The blood is red, my kin is dead, my life has almost sung. The feild of dread, which on fear fed, in which apples hung. Why have I killed, when I could have fufilled, my destiny as fated? My sins are here, and now I fear, the deaths of which I traded. Why fight, not unite, when we could be close? When my death comes, and I hear the drums, I will feel gross. My family's in heaven, my brother only seven, and I wont join them. For sins once made, the price can't be payed, I'll have to keep 'em. Sins, in, out, in, my time has finally sung, with all these things that l've done. Oooooohhhhh.... even reading that one makes me sad.
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Larka
Omega
The ships have come... To carry you home... Leave these regions....
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Post by Larka on May 26, 2005 17:43:35 GMT -5
Oh wow! I like that one.. Well, Amber, we're a morbit species....
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Post by Amber on May 26, 2005 17:44:57 GMT -5
Thank you! Yes we are. I think it's Rain's fault. She has influenced me!
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Post by Rain on May 27, 2005 1:05:38 GMT -5
Thank you! Yes we are. I think it's Rain's fault. She has influenced me! Lol, I'm sawwy! I do like this poem though. Maybe you should give your poems name?
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Post by Sapphire Eyes on May 27, 2005 2:19:21 GMT -5
Oh wow! We have such artistik wolfies on our site! That's really kewwl Amber! I luff such morbid stuff!
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Post by Amber on May 27, 2005 15:07:43 GMT -5
I don't know what to name it! Could you give me some?
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Post by Rain on May 27, 2005 16:52:52 GMT -5
I don't something like: "Death is Red" or something.
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Post by Sapphire Eyes on May 28, 2005 6:55:18 GMT -5
Yes.. i think 'Death is Red' is a good title..
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Post by Amber on May 30, 2005 11:50:45 GMT -5
I think that's a good idea *goes and changes it*
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Post by Rain on May 30, 2005 11:59:17 GMT -5
Lol, it just makes it easier to distinguish your poems more if you give them names.
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Post by Amber on May 30, 2005 12:02:36 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Rain on May 30, 2005 17:00:11 GMT -5
No problem.
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Post by Giacamo on Jun 3, 2005 20:05:47 GMT -5
your poems are really good but they frighten me
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Post by Amber on Jun 14, 2005 13:39:48 GMT -5
Why? What about them frightens you?
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