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A Poem
May 26, 2005 17:29:21 GMT -5
Post by Amber on May 26, 2005 17:29:21 GMT -5
Hmmmmmmmm...... I felt like writing this one but I'm not sure how good it is..........
The moon is shining, the night is still, nothing moves at all.
You cannot see, not hear, not speak, you must answer the call.
The wheel is turning, fate is burning, leaving you to dread.
You cannot see, not hear, not speak, you must answer the call.
If you can't find, you must be blind, the life is everywhere.
You cannot see, not hear, not speak, you must answer the call.
There is dancing, happy prancing, but it makes no sound.
You cannot see, not hear, not speak, you must answer the call.
The moon is shining, the night is still, nothing moves at all.
You cannot see, not hear, not speak, You must answer the call!
I hope you liked it!
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Larka
Omega
The ships have come... To carry you home... Leave these regions....
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May 26, 2005 17:45:18 GMT -5
Post by Larka on May 26, 2005 17:45:18 GMT -5
This one's good, too! You're a pretty good poet... But I prefer your other one....
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May 26, 2005 17:46:54 GMT -5
Post by Amber on May 26, 2005 17:46:54 GMT -5
Thanks..... maybe I was just rusty. Or maybe you like morbit poems better.
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Larka
Omega
The ships have come... To carry you home... Leave these regions....
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May 26, 2005 17:49:59 GMT -5
Post by Larka on May 26, 2005 17:49:59 GMT -5
Yes.. Guess I like the other poem better 'cos it's so very morbid..... Well.. It may not seem so, but actually I am a quite happy person.. Really..
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A Poem
May 26, 2005 17:53:01 GMT -5
Post by Amber on May 26, 2005 17:53:01 GMT -5
I don't judge people when I first meet them.
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Larka
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The ships have come... To carry you home... Leave these regions....
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May 26, 2005 17:55:32 GMT -5
Post by Larka on May 26, 2005 17:55:32 GMT -5
That's very good! lol I try not to do either.. Sometimes I pass.. Sometimes I fail.. But, oh well.. Nob is perfect, huh? lol
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May 26, 2005 17:56:52 GMT -5
Post by Amber on May 26, 2005 17:56:52 GMT -5
lol ;D that's right. I will judge you when I get to know you better, and I'm sure it wont be bad.
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Larka
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The ships have come... To carry you home... Leave these regions....
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May 26, 2005 18:00:55 GMT -5
Post by Larka on May 26, 2005 18:00:55 GMT -5
Oh, I hope so! LOL Nice to meet you! LOL *tries to get to know Amber*
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May 27, 2005 1:04:47 GMT -5
Post by Rain on May 27, 2005 1:04:47 GMT -5
Very good Amber.
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May 27, 2005 15:08:59 GMT -5
Post by Amber on May 27, 2005 15:08:59 GMT -5
Thank you!
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May 27, 2005 16:54:27 GMT -5
Post by Rain on May 27, 2005 16:54:27 GMT -5
We try to encourage talent here.
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May 30, 2005 11:52:38 GMT -5
Post by Amber on May 30, 2005 11:52:38 GMT -5
And encourage you should keep on doing!
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May 30, 2005 11:58:36 GMT -5
Post by Rain on May 30, 2005 11:58:36 GMT -5
Yes we should and will.
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May 30, 2005 12:03:22 GMT -5
Post by Amber on May 30, 2005 12:03:22 GMT -5
Wow I'm confusing myself!
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May 30, 2005 12:05:52 GMT -5
Post by Rain on May 30, 2005 12:05:52 GMT -5
Lol, how exactly?
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May 30, 2005 16:39:22 GMT -5
Post by Amber on May 30, 2005 16:39:22 GMT -5
Instead of saying the words in the order I would normally say them I put them in a different order that would still make sense.
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May 30, 2005 17:04:16 GMT -5
Post by Rain on May 30, 2005 17:04:16 GMT -5
Ah right, kewlio.
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