Larka
Omega
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Post by Larka on May 26, 2005 17:03:09 GMT -5
Well, if you don't like this one: It's Amber's fault! She said she likes my poetry! LOL Right.. I just feel like posting one more...
Leavin' for Love
The mate is dead The puppies too The pack has perished At morning’s dew
The moon is shining ‘Ts light floods the ground And peace is coming ‘Pon the one. abandoned
Laying down Life streams out Leavin’ nothing’ But a velum, a cloud
Joined the loved ones Just by will As few can do And fewer will.
Hmm.. That#'s one of the poems I almost like.. lol
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Post by Amber on May 26, 2005 17:23:17 GMT -5
That one's good too! I really like it...... but I have one question. Did she kill herself?
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Larka
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Post by Larka on May 26, 2005 17:42:22 GMT -5
Well.. Maybe.. But maybe the cause of her dead was a broken heart? We cannot know.. Quite morbit, my poems, huh? lol
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Post by Amber on May 26, 2005 17:43:54 GMT -5
Yes........ read mine........ I'd like to see what you think.
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Larka
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Post by Larka on May 26, 2005 17:58:41 GMT -5
Well.. I answered.. lol Umm.. Right.. I have one other poem which I would like to post.. it's the last one for today.. lol I wrote it for Larka.. hmm.. lol
So, here it is.. It's called 'Soul'
Soul Have or not To know Is my request
Walking Towards the basin Clear water Reflecting
Reflecting me My orbs or not I hope it does Darkness will me absorb
Nearing Hoping Hearing the crickets So close-by
Stopping Looking Nothing Darkness
I die
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Post by Rain on May 27, 2005 1:07:42 GMT -5
Ooo... a poem full of mystery, very good!
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Post by Runic Secret on May 27, 2005 1:52:37 GMT -5
YAY! I like it's short lines.. It's very good to read. lol
But I like the other one, too.. But you let her die, just as Rain did!
..No hope in the world.. lol
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Larka
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Post by Larka on May 27, 2005 9:57:04 GMT -5
Yes.. Sawwy.. Hope's gone, huh? lol
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Post by Rain on May 27, 2005 9:58:04 GMT -5
Heehee, I made my character die too. I just think that people like it more if it is morbid and they communicate with the poem better.
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Larka
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Post by Larka on May 27, 2005 10:08:40 GMT -5
Yes... And somehow it's easier for me to write morbit and to find words to let my charries die than to make them happy...
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Post by Rain on May 27, 2005 10:11:40 GMT -5
Lol, yeah it is so much more easier. IWth happy poems I can't really think of anything else to write apart from "She was happy" I did write a poem for y boyfriend once, I haven't given it to him yet though, heehee. That is around as positive as I get.
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Post by Sapphire Eyes on May 28, 2005 5:36:03 GMT -5
I like this small poem, Larka heard in her dream at the dense fog ruins! Just so you know.. lol
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Post by Amber on Jun 14, 2005 17:10:38 GMT -5
I like these, you have talent! *is weirder than both of them put together*
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