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Post by Rain on May 26, 2005 10:00:01 GMT -5
This poem is about a wolven to-be mother trying to search for shelter to have her unborn pups.
Night swallowed her up, Something kicked her from the inside, it was a pup. The darkness enriched with twilight, had nothing but gleaming orbs, golden and filled with fright, for her dependant unborn. She looked frantically, She had to get their for dawn. Nothing, no shelter around, She ran as fast as she could, making a thundering sound; with her paws, on which were, a swollen belly, filled with unborn lives, and surrounded by mother's fur. The blizzard was getting worse, pelting her with drops of cold, This was the mother's curse, to have her pups born out in the open, She wouldn't allow it to, No it couldn't happen, Her steps were getting weak, She couldn't carry on, no she had to seek, Sure her mate was dead, But she could do this on her own, But in her heart she bled, She couldn't lose his cubs; that was all she had left, Please, no, not now With that she collapsed, Her body lay in the snow, The next morning, the sun shone, On her form, laying there dead, Her life had gone, and with that the cubs, I failed...
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Post by Runic Secret on May 26, 2005 11:09:04 GMT -5
Oh wow.. That's really beautiful... You let her die... But I luff it!
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Post by Rain on May 26, 2005 11:50:09 GMT -5
I'm sawwy for letting her die. I write morbid, lol. But Sapphire asked for a wolfie poem, lol. Thanks for the rating.
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Post by Damora on May 26, 2005 11:51:50 GMT -5
wow thats rreally good well done rain ... wish i could write like that
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Post by Rain on May 26, 2005 11:54:32 GMT -5
Thanks Damora. I wrote it in Maths today.
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Post by Damora on May 26, 2005 12:04:40 GMT -5
what happenefd to your maths work (looks guilty)
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Post by Rain on May 26, 2005 12:08:18 GMT -5
Lol, it was my last day of school today so were wern't doing much anyways. For full details check the 'random' in the general board, lol.
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Post by Sapphire Eyes on May 26, 2005 12:29:03 GMT -5
Yeah.. Check our 11 pages of nonesense.. LOL I juff the poem!!
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Post by Rain on May 26, 2005 12:36:41 GMT -5
Yeah lol! 11 pages. The general board has loads of posts.
Thanks for the rating! I will post more when I have uhh.. written more.
((I have to go for aorund an hour, be back soon!! Byebyes!!!*waves*))
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Post by Amber on May 26, 2005 15:18:25 GMT -5
That is really beautiful but so sad I like it.......... do you write happy stuff? (not critisizing...)
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Post by Rain on May 27, 2005 1:03:45 GMT -5
I can write happy stuff but there are more things that rhyme with sad and negative words, lol. I also find it easier to write about sad stuff.
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Post by Amber on May 27, 2005 15:11:35 GMT -5
Yeah I guess so............. *says doubtfully*
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Post by Rain on May 29, 2005 17:24:24 GMT -5
Well I find it much easier, lol. I don't know why really, just being sad myself gives me a spur to write about how I feel and then I turn that into a poem.
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Post by Amber on Jun 14, 2005 17:11:56 GMT -5
Well I feel the same way.
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