|
|
Post by Crisana on Jun 24, 2005 17:05:39 GMT -5
Cat fight White cat, Black cat, One was skinny one was fat, White cats claws, Black cats teeth, White cat falls, Black cat mauls, White cats lonely in the street, Black cat was the last he would meet. Night of the tiger! Creeping in the long grass, Not letting anything pass, He sat quietly, He sat mightily, Watching a deer, It was only mere, He leapt with teeth and claws, The deer fell to the floor, Not hungry anymore… Attack! Wolves approach, Circling, Getting ever closer, My heart pumping faster, They snarled and growled, And also howled, The moon shining brightly, The wolves shone mightily, A white wolf appeared, She was known around these lands, Crisana-The angel in disguise, Another life snuffed out by Crisana, She took mine… Lies. Lies are always here, around every corner, And this is how i feel, Towards ya... Why do people lie, i cant make it, I cant explain it, But it just brings sadness, No joy... So why lie? Just explain it.... Yeah there kinda...the same as my mood right now...killing things and depressed and all....  |
|
|
|
Post by Rain on Jun 24, 2005 17:18:52 GMT -5
They are very good, I especially like the one of the black and white cat.  |
|
|
|
Post by Crisana on Jun 24, 2005 17:22:01 GMT -5
Awwww...thankies...i like that one to, they are all pretty morbid dont ya think...i like morbid at the moment....all bout death....which i like at the moment...i like the lies one to, cos thats how ive been treated with a group of people on another forum... |
|
|
|
Post by Rain on Jun 24, 2005 17:31:25 GMT -5
Oh, you ahve been treated that way? Poor you... Hope it turns out okay. I write about stuff that has happbnedned to me too, like the 'Blinded by Love' poem.
|
|
|
|
Post by Crisana on Jun 24, 2005 17:34:08 GMT -5
yeah i have a thing for writing poems right now...  ...and i write when im sad...so..thats how i express my feeling through poetry...and kinda, eerm..threatening people ok ok...not exactly threatening people but having bad additude bla bla bla...and i have an authority problem...hate school hate life...so yeah.l..i write poetry....AND KICK BUTT......heehee |
|
|
|
Post by Rain on Jun 24, 2005 17:37:08 GMT -5
Lol, good for you. That's why I write poetry. My ex-boyfriend triggered it off. That's one of the few things good that he ever did for me.
|
|
|
|
Post by Crisana on Jun 24, 2005 17:38:25 GMT -5
lol...i would of bladey killed im if he made me do that stuff to me...
|
|
|
|
Post by Rain on Jun 24, 2005 17:44:14 GMT -5
Yeah but the thing that no one seems to understand is that I loved him and that made me think that I derserved whatever he did to me, so I punished myself for whatever I thought I did wrong.
|
|
|
|
Post by Giacamo on Jun 24, 2005 17:54:22 GMT -5
i have always said 'dont be angry with yourself about something you didnt do, take it out on a weaker individual' but that was back when i was a wild youngin'  im an old man |
|
|
|
Post by Fren on Jun 25, 2005 4:25:24 GMT -5
o0...Rain, what surprises me is that I do understand. I can almost feel your exsasperation that no-one seems to get that it is no where near as easy as they make it out to be. Also I can kinda feel that you loved him so much thought that it was you; of course it wasn't him; you did something wrong, why else would he do that to you? 'Course, you didn't know what it was, but you'd have to punish yourself for it anyway. He was only doing that because he loved you; he wouldn't do it otherwise. (Did I 'sense' what you were feeling correctly? ) I never used to be like this, able to guess what others are feeling (though of course I will never know exactly what you went through)...quite the opposite, I used to be very cold and harsh. ... I think you guys have given me feelings. ^^ |
|
|
|
Post by Rain on Jun 25, 2005 4:31:20 GMT -5
Lol, sorry for giving you feelings Fren.  Well now I see that I never did anything wrong for him to hit me, he was just doing it because he was in a bad mood but that was how I felt then, Fren, yes. |
|
|
|
Post by Fren on Jun 25, 2005 4:48:25 GMT -5
Well, that's a good thing and I bad thing that I was almost right...good that I could tell...somehow...bad that you felt it. ;-; Oh, and apology accepted. |
|
|
|
Post by Crisana on Jun 25, 2005 6:27:09 GMT -5
Yeah, its just, nothing ever goes right... Its like your the one whos doing everything wrong, when you know your not but everone seems to be against you, so then you start to belive in what they say...then you finally realise its all lies...thats what my poems about...heres another one: I know its not me, But thats what you believe, Im innocent, But you seem to think im guilty, But now i believe, that it was me, And i just cant see, Where i went wrong, But then i turn a corner, And the lies that follow me, Are haunting me, They go where i go, Then i realise it was all lies, And then i seem to die, Cos my soul has left my body, And im standing lonely, But the lies within me, Control me. By stevi...ok thats my real name...i hate it...((Sounds like a boy name in MY opinion....no offense to anyone...oh yeah and the white cats me...X|)) |
|
|
|
Post by Giacamo on Jun 25, 2005 7:22:43 GMT -5
you guys are a depressing lot where as, im just angry alot ;D
|
|
|
|
Post by Crisana on Jun 25, 2005 7:36:13 GMT -5
*Heehee*...but i am depressed at the moment..cant help that... |
|
|
|
Post by Giacamo on Jun 25, 2005 12:04:41 GMT -5
depression leads to regret-tion eh i dont have any ryming phrases....sowwey  |
|
|
|
Post by Crisana on Jun 25, 2005 12:08:10 GMT -5
hehehe...oh well gia...work on it or dont you wanna turn out 'depressed' like us? |
|
|
|
Post by Fren on Jun 25, 2005 13:48:51 GMT -5
I know a girl called Stevie (Yush I know not how you spell yours) and no-one's every said it sounded like a boys name...in fact I know several Stevie's and lots of Stevi's and they're all girls, the only male Stevi(e) I know of is Stevi(e) Wonder. o0 As y'all have put me in a rather depressed mood; It's not me...is it?
It's not me
I know
My heart tells me so.
But, why, then
Would you
Decide this to do?
I lie here
And weep
No dreams; and no sleep.
You hit me
Some more
And I hit the floor
I cry out
Again
I can't take the pain.
It has to
Be me,
It's now plain to see.
I've done some
Thing wrong
I hear the death song.
And now I
Must pay
Death, take me away.
I'll do it
Myself,
My life has no wealth.
I pick up
The rope,
My very last hope,
Maybe it
Can pay
The debt of my days.
I gave up
Not faught.
My family
With grief
Will now be wraught
But I've done something wrong.
I wish I knew what. Geez. Now THAT is a depressing poem.  I got the inspiration from Rain, and my friend Cheryl who got abused by her ex too. |
|
|
|
Post by Crisana on Jun 25, 2005 13:52:56 GMT -5
awwww...thats good but sad fren... |
|
|
|
Post by Amber on Jun 26, 2005 18:36:08 GMT -5
Aw that is so sad!
I think that everyone here should try to write happy poems. If you don't try or practice, you never get better.
|
|
|
|
Post by Crisana on Jun 27, 2005 12:29:07 GMT -5
well happy poems well theres never inspiration with sad poemns...its like always there so its like....really easy cos the words are just....there
|
|
|
|
Post by Giacamo on Jun 27, 2005 13:06:31 GMT -5
hey i have an idea!!! why doesnt crisana write a poem about bearing a RAPIST'S pups ;D
|
|
|
|
Post by Rain on Jun 27, 2005 14:19:32 GMT -5
Geez. Now THAT is a depressing poem. I got the inspiration from Rain, and my friend Cheryl who got abused by her ex too. Soz Fren but very good poem!! |
|
|
|
Post by Crisana on Jun 27, 2005 14:22:33 GMT -5
GIA!!! i thought youve had enough....stop it!
|
|
|
|
Post by Giacamo on Jun 27, 2005 16:11:04 GMT -5
oops i forgot i even wrote that post it was BEFORE i wrote i would stop ;D so sawwy
|
|
|
|
Post by Amber on Jun 27, 2005 19:35:23 GMT -5
Now that's not funny Gia. You ar einsulting Crisana and Canaid.
|
|
|
|
Post by Giacamo on Jun 27, 2005 21:08:03 GMT -5
only there wolves not them as a person....
|
|
|
|
Post by Amber on Jun 29, 2005 17:01:09 GMT -5
*shakes head and points out*
you are insulting how they RP
|
|
|
|
Post by Giacamo on Jun 29, 2005 22:22:44 GMT -5
im insulting how immoral that particular decision was! now drop the subject!  |
|
|
|
Post by Amber on Jun 30, 2005 19:06:31 GMT -5
Only if you will.  |
|
